MORE ART!!!!!!
By Ella R
Today I realized that art is
to short. I was so happy with my self for setting a goal for my
project! But than the art
teacher said “I need your project by the end of next week. That put so much
pressure on me. I Wanted to scream that was how mad I was!! It felt as if all
my hard work got thrown in the trash. Art is good and should be longer because
it helps kids express them self, builds creative thinking and we should
definitely do more challenging projects.
Art
helps kids express them self by being able to let their feelings out. You can
express your feelings by if you are sad than you could draw a stormy night. Or if you are happy than you could draw a
smiley face. That is why art helps you express your self.
Also
art helps kid’s builds creative thinking. It helps kinds believe that they can
do anything with clay or something. It also helps kids push them self to do
their very best. Also you get to use
many materials like clay, markers, paint, crayons ect.
The
last reason is that we should do more challenging projects. Doing more projects
can increase the learning of art. And besides how would not want to try harder
in life. So I hope that how is ever reading this agrees with me that art is 2
times a week. And a solution can be to have it as a jeep class with Mrs. H or
Mrs. D.
The End
i liked your idea you seem like you really love art but i didn't really like the topic myself but it doesn't mean you have to stop loving art - Ashley p.
ReplyDeletehi ella! i luved yr essay, it shows that you do really luv art. i agree, we should have art at least 2 times per week. i wish you could throw some more mini stories in there to persuade people into thinking, ya i totally agree.but u did persuade me! by the way, isnt blogging fun!!!
ReplyDeleteella i loved your idea and i really like the paragraph about how art helps express yourself! i wish that you would trow some mini stories in there overall great essay
ReplyDelete-abby
I LOVE your topic! it is great.
ReplyDeleteJane
hi its Nicole!you must really like art more then me over all some of your deatails didn't make that much sence
ReplyDeleteI almost never have time to finish my work at art. I think that the teachers will listen to you!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCatherine
its Nicole it seems that you want to have more art time so badly and I do agree with you we should have more art time :D
ReplyDeletehi ella i think that is a problem and im glad you wrote about it art should be two tines a week i totally agree i wish you put in more small monents(mini stories) over all i loved your writing
ReplyDeleteyeah art should be longer -maggie:)
ReplyDeletei totally agree. art should be longer. it would be better that way. i NEVER EVER EVER finish my work in art. it would be better if it was longer time or AT LEAST 2 or 3 times per week. you should start a petition. i think its a really big deal. - Casey W
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