THERE SHOULD BE MORE
RECESS
By: Mark Hanania
Its time to make the game plan, “first run deep down the sides then
turn a small curve and get open” Adam the QB says. So I get ready then I run down the sidelines
after, I curve in, and the next thing you know “tweet” the whistle blows. It would be better to have more recess to
finish the play and other games which would give us more exercise. Also if I got no pass that play, the extra
time of recess would at least get me a pass or two. We could also handle feelings with the extra
time. Lastly you can talk with friends
not in your class.
There should be more recess because we need more exercise. We can get more exercise by being able to run
and play more. With this we stay
healthier for everyday. Then we get back
to class. Another way get exercise is
playing more with friends and getting the energy out of us which makes us want
to rest in our seats and get ready for class.
Last of all we can get other things done besides running. I think there should be more recess because you will have more time to handle feelings. First of all you are allowed to talk during recess, but if we have the same time you will just be running around the classroom asking for help. Also you may have no good problem solvers in your class so you end up asking everybody and getting in trouble.
I think there should be more recess because you will have more time to talk and play with friends from other classes. You can’t go to other classes in the middle of a lesson. Then you will just forget what you want to say the next day. But if we have more recess it will be easier. Also the only other place to communicate is the bathroom and you’re not allowed to stay there too long.
These are the reasons why I want more recess.
mark i like how you say "but if".and i like how you worded it. i wish if you could give more detal.
ReplyDeletefrom aidan
I really loved your essay. the lead was great. My favorite part was when you said we couldn't talk in the bathroom. FOR THE LOLZ. great essay!
ReplyDelete-Luke
i realy liked it i thout it was a great story
ReplyDelete-max
I could really hear your voice! Also, the lead was great!
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