Snack Time Should Be Longer
By Abby
Snack time
should be longer. I’m tired of not having enough time with my class, no time to
get organized for the day, and most of all no time to eat! If snack is longer
then this problem would be solved. Overall, our day would be better.
We should have
a longer snack because then we could have more fun time with our class. Our
teacher usually read are class a story during snack time. Today we only had
eight minutes to read and eat. So we all felt rushed and annoyed with the time
we had. If we had more snack time then we could all talk and read together a
lot longer. If we have time to talk and read doesn’t that mean we should also
have more time to get organized during snack?
We should have
a longer snack time because then we would have more time to get organized for
the school day. We always have to have two sharpened pencils and other supplies
for the next class. I always see that people are forgetting to get those
supplies for the next class. So that would be helpful because we never seem to
get that time through out the day. We also have to eat, right?
The most
important reason we need a longer snack is because we need time to eat.
Sometimes are lessons go longer so we usually always have less then fifteen
minutes to eat. A lot of kids think that is not enough time to eat. I know that
I couldn’t finish my snack in that amount of time. So I agree.
All in all I
don’t like that our snack time is so short. I feel like we get our snack and
then throw it away in the already not finished snack trash a minute later. Do
you think our snack time should be longer?
Abby i do think we should have longer snack sometimes when mrs.lydecker says snack is over i feel like im not full your friend Ashley p.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Abby, I feel your pain and relate to it because I feel that there is not enough time to eat snack. I like the idea of a longer snack time that can be used to eat and get organized for the rest of the day. As for your final question at the end, I do think that snack time should be a little longer. In my class we have to get right to writing so we don't finish our whole snack. Since I have Miss Stodden, we have a lot of writing to cover in an hour. I like how you inserted good details and ideas to support your thoughts about needing more time for snack.
ReplyDeleteYour social companion Tess
You are right it seems like snack is two minutes. You really got your point across!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCatherine
yo yo abby, i have read yr essay and can i tell u, whooooooo! i luved yr essay i think snack time should be longer! great details and you hooked me, i wanted to keep on reaing!!!!!!!! your a great writer! now trust me on this..................... NEVER STOP DOING WHAT YOUR DOING! Because you ROCK at it!!!! any who, isnt blogging fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteyour person friend who sits next to you,
Elizabth L.
I agree our snack should be longer. luv ya essay! love maddie!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletei do think that we should have snack longer when ms stodden says snack is over but its
ReplyDeletebeen 2 mins
from your friiend sophia b!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Abby you have a great point i totally agree!also, i feel your pain because sometimes if we spend too much time in social studies then we only have like 5 minutes of snack.
ReplyDeleteyour friend,KATE :)!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Hi Abby! you make a great point. Also, I agree because we can not be hungry for the rest of the day. I love it!
ReplyDeleteJane
Hi Abby! I agree snack is to short! Great essay!
ReplyDelete- Marisa