Schools should allow
electronics
By Kylie M.
Kids these days are not allowed to have
electronics in school but I think they could be used for a lot more. Like come
on we live in the 21st century and we have computers, iPads and other stuff
that some people did not have back then and we are still using pencil and paper
like the olden days! In my opinion I think that we should be getting more use
out of them. Like computers were
designed to type and surf the web and we are barely ever using them and I don’t
think that’s fair at all like we are in fourth grade and we are old enough to
know not to play with the computers and mess them up! Also the electronic that
I have never seen at school is the iPad, like the iPad can be used to do
educational stuff like for example we could use it for math and do some math
games and other stuff. Another way we
could use it is for social studies so we could look up words and such.
The last electronic I think we should have in
school is a phone, the phone is not allowed in school because they think we are
going to have them out all day but if you just make some rules for them I bet
we wont do it! Also a reason why we should have it is because what if we forget
something? We could just call home and ask for our parent to bring it to school
and all our problems would be solved!
I think we should have electronics in school
because we could use them for very important reasons like the computer we could
use for writing class instead of having to use pencil and paper! Like once in
writing I was trying to write and essay but I could not and something was
hurting my hand so I stopped for a moment and I saw blisters every where from
writing so much and it made it really hard for me to write any longer so I
finally gave it a rest and stopped.
The next reason why we I think we should have
electronics allowed in school is because we could use a lot more of electronics
not just the computer. The electronic I had in mind was the iPad because we
could use the iPad for all sorts of things! For example we could use the iPads
for a lot of things like we could use them for math and social studies. For
example we could use it for math games because sometimes in school we play math
games so I thought we could have one all to our selves and save all our stuff
on it instead of having accidentally not saving it right and having it get lost
in cyber space. Also we should use it iPads for social studies because for
example what if we have to write a word you don’t know how to spell it instead
of having to ask the teacher you could just easily type it in and look how to
spell it also if you don’t know the definition of a word just easily type it in
and check the definition of the word you want.
The last electronic I wish to have in school
is a phone, I wish to have phones in school because picture this, you walk into
school and your running a bit late but then you realize that you left something
at home! And you can’t afford to walk back home and you say to yourself what do
I do? Well if we were allowed to have electronics you could easily get out your
phone and call home and ask your parent if they could bring it to school for
you and then your problem would be solved so I think that will do you good. That’s why schools should allow
electronics because it would put a lot of stress of our backs about
homework. Also it would be like a
cushion to fall back on if you forget something at home. So I hope you guys would consider this as
something helpful and make that change and allow electronics in your school and
ours.
Great essay!!!!!!!! I like how you said, " like come on this is the 21st". No I diddent like it I loved it!!! I also think you shouldn't have used like in your writing, it dident sound very good when I read it. Also I think you should have talked more about the blisters. That was big!!!!!! But over all I bess I'd say I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteRachel
i loved your topic i like how the topic is reasnoble and could happen. i also like the 21st centry thing ! i just wish you could add more mini stories
ReplyDelete-abby
you are SOO corect!!!! :)
ReplyDeletei do want electronics in school! :)
ReplyDeleteps its maggie
ReplyDeleteI totally agree! That would rock! i can tell you feel strongly about this, and you give lots of reasons, and good ones too! This is a big problem that defenitly needs solving!-Margaret
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