Homework Online
By:
Nicole P
Do you think we should have homework online?
I do. One reason is that you don’t have
to forget your homework in school or at home. It helps you better at typing,
you can just send it to your teacher and it won’t be a problem.
We
should have homework online because you don’t have to forget your homework at
school or at home. For example today I
forgot my homework so I had to use all my tickets to buy a homework pass and
you don’t have to put anything in your binder except for your important
papers. Another thing is that you don’t
get oops slips unless you don’t do your homework.
We
should have homework online because it people just cant type fast and it helps
little kids lean to helps you get better at typing. It helps because some type. You can also get a head start in typing
to. There’s also a thing in our school
called a type writer. But that’s for
older kids. It helps you now how to do
spaces, numbers and your name.
We
should have homework online because you don’t have to jam it in your binder you
can just send it to your teacher and when your teachers done with it she can
send it back to you. It wont get
wrinkles at all. That’s why we should
have homework online.
Luke H. I really like your idea. I think its very strong. You can make i longer though. :)
ReplyDeleteyour right luke - Ashley p.
Deleteyeah its just that I couldn't think of long anof reasons
DeleteI think this topic is great you are so right about homework online like Luke you could of made it longer.- Ashley p.
ReplyDeleteAlex W. I like it but some sentences are unclear to me and i dont knw what you tring to say in some sentences.
ReplyDeleteBut overall i like your essay :D
I realy like your essay.And i agree with you.we should do homework online becase you can just send the homework to your teachers when your done.
ReplyDeleteHi nicole,
ReplyDeleteI really liked what you said about not worry if you didnt do you homework so i really liked it:)
From Ella:)
I loved it. Great topic. Some parts were a bit unclear and you could have writen more. Over all I loved it!:)
ReplyDeleteI think your essay is a great idea.I think we should do homework online too i agree with your point about forgetting home work at school or home.:)
ReplyDeleteLeah
I loved your essay! the details were very good.
ReplyDeleteKate