MCAS
By
AdamD
MCAS is unfair to kids. Is this test
really that important? Most kids don’t know that we’re being used. This one
test comes with so much pressure and it doesn’t even end up on your report
card. Why? I intend to show you.
MCAS is unfair because we’re being used.
One way or another they use you. A way they do it is getting house prices up.
If we do well it says that our school is good. But that also means they want to
move here, so the prices on houses in Massachusetts
towns go up. I think MCAS should stand for,” Massachusetts Child Abuse System.”
You are being used by your teachers and even your parents. Your teacher piles a
lot of expectations on you and your class and your parents don’t realize some
of this so they still want you to do well. There still just using you. Maybe
some teachers just want to be known as good teachers. For example, if kids get
bad grades they could think they might be known as a bad teacher. So sometimes
it’s the parents that want the same thing. To me and probably to you it doesn’t
surprise us that this comes with a whole lot of pressure.
MCAS is unfair because of the ridiculous
pressure it comes with. All year we have preparation. My teacher gives us a
practice almost three times a week. We already have too much homework anyway!
When we’re writing we’re practicing for a test in MCAS called long comp. That’s
a five paragraph essay we have to do. I think five paragraphs are way too much
for a test. If it’s not enough already we’re being pressured by Massachusetts . Our own
state! They want us to do well so we’ll be known as a good educational state.
You have the heaviest pressure over you when you’re actually taking the test.
They make sure your desks are apart. It makes you feel like you’re in the Navy.
But why is this testing so important? All this and it doesn’t even end up on
your report card.
MCAS is unfair because it’s a big waste
of time. All this fuss over MCAS is not needed. It doesn’t even end up on your
report card. I mean come on! Everything you do and all the hard work is not
shown. The test it self takes up a couple whole days. We could be learning
something that actually matters. Next to that the practices are endless. We use
up all this precious time for a test that doesn’t matter.
MCAS is unfair. At the beginning I said,
“Does this really matter?” After this I don’t think so at all. We’re being
used, we’re under pressure, and it’s a big waste of time. I hope this will
change and you will help!
Adam I liked how you put in the joke it made your essay more fun. I also liked the way you put together the whole essay. The only thing that i didn't like was that to me it was mostly all the same thing.
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