Dear Ms
Feeney,
I think too much homework is not good
for kids. It causes stress and also prevents you from playing outside. Lastly,
it tires you out for the next day of school. I think kids should do their
homework, but if they have too much they could forget and get an oops
slip.
Homework stresses you out because you
get all mad that you have so much. You feel mad and you want to yell at your
parents. But mostly, is that you will
feel mad at yourself because you spent all night on it and you didn’t get to
play outside.
Another reason is that you waste time
away from school. If you didn’t have a
lot of homework you could have played outside, go do sports and spend more time
with your family and friends. I think
that fourth graders would love to do all of those things.
The last reason is that you’ll be more
interested in school because you won’t stay up late doing your homework. You can listen more, pay attention more, and
be more awake for P.E., art, music and library.
I think that if we, the fourth graders,
had less homework we could be more active, not waste time out of school and not
get stressed out.
Sincerely,
Mr. Sam Gualtieri
Sam, this is a wicked good essay! You are like a professinal!
ReplyDeleteSophia McGonagle
This is a really good topic (and essay)! I like how you turn your essay into a letter to Ms. Feeney.
ReplyDelete-Casey Waldman
really? its SOOO not true!!! maybe teachers can limit our homework, but kids HAVE to do some!!!
ReplyDeleteI AGREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletesam
ReplyDeletei really liked your idea and i thought that you should really give that to mrs.Fenney! over all i thought you did a wonderful job:) :)