BY RICHIE LUCAS
Do you ever get that feeling when you love a place
so much you can’t leave it? Well I get that feeling when I’m at Cape Cod .
I get that feeling because of the ocean, the biking
paths, and my cousins who come over. I get that feeling because of the ocean,
the biking paths, and my cousins who visit. I GET THAT FEELING AT THE OCEAN
BECAUSE I GO ON MY BOOGIE BOARD AND GO SWIMMING OUT TO THE BUOY. Another way
the ocean is great is putting on my snorkel and my goggle to look for anything
that looks interesting. My last way the ocean is great is the fishing because
you can go on the shore line and almost catch anything in the water.
Another
reason the cape is the best is because of the biking paths. The biking paths
are great because you can almost go to any place around town. You can ride your
bikes to the beach, to the church in the center of town, to see the scenic
view, and much more.
My last reason that the cape is the best
is my cousins who visit. I like my cousins coming over because we can go to the
beach and go swimming and get shave ice at the stand at the beach. You can also
play man hunt at night around two houses and sometimes the parents play with
us.
If you ever
get the chance to go to Cape Cod go.
Wow Richie, you're essay reminds me of how sad I get when I leave Cape Cod. It so good! You really are a professinal essay writer.
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Loved it. Strong lead and really made me think about your topic. Your ending was a little plain and you need some more follow-ups. Other that I thought it was amazing!-Shaina
ReplyDeletei liked the the lead.i also liked how you made the {i get that feeling when im at the ocean because i get to go out on my boogie bord out to the buoy}. but i wish you would have said more about the things you find when you are snorkaling.
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