I don’t think we
should have to take Mcas
By:
Ashley P.
Why
do we have to take Mcas? The reasons I don’t think we should have to take Mcas
is because it stresses kids out, the teachers use us and as we get older the
teachers expect more from us.
Mcas is one of those tests that you
feel you have to do awesome on it but, while kids are trying to prepare for it
starts to get stressful and it’s not a good stress it’s a bad one. On the day
of Mcas our parents do everything to get us ready for it, like make us eat a
big breakfast and make sure that we got a goodnight’s sleep and that puts even
more pressure on us. So if we do bad we kind of feel horrible, because everyone
helped us get ready for it.
Another reason I don’t think we
should have to take Mcas is because the teachers use us. I know the reason that
we have to take Mcas is because the teachers have to see what were doing good
at and bad at. But couldn’t the teachers think of an easier way instead of a
test that you get so stressed out about that you feel like your brains going to
roll out of your head?
And to conclude I think we shouldn’t
have to take Mcas because as we get older the teachers expect more from us.
When the teachers expect more from we expect more from us. I know it’s only
fourth grade the second year of taking Mcas but at the beginning of the week
our teacher started talking about the scores and other things and that got us
worried about how we’ll do and if we get
a good score. I know that we can’t change the rules about Mcas but I do
think we can change it a little!
Maddie Y. Ashley, I love your essay. I love how you wrote something that everyone agrees with. I also love it because everything you said is true. What I wish you did was you could have used a conclusion as a different paragraph. Your essay is amazing!
ReplyDeletei totally agree with your topic btw this is abby this topic really caught my eye ! i just wish you had more mini stories
ReplyDelete-abby :)
its Nicole! you can write even beter and even longer then me. I really do agree with you I really don't like mcas ether because im not the best reader.
ReplyDeleteluved yr essay ashley! lots of detail and you really told yr readers about MCAS i luved yr essay! you made me think.............. wow i really DO NOT like MCAS!!!!!
ReplyDelete-lizzie
Ashley I also love your essay. I agree with you I don't think we should have MCAS. I get stressed and worried too. One thing I think you could have done better on is make the last reason and the conclusion two different paragraphs because when people read it they might say to themselves " where is the last reason?" Before they get to that part. Jocelyn D.
ReplyDeletei agree that wer shouldnt have to take MCAS. i think all your opinions are really great!!!
ReplyDeletei totally agree. everyone hates mcas!
ReplyDelete- Casey Waldman