Better
Cafeteria Lunch
By Tess
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As I took a tray from the lunch lady, I peeked
at my food and I was a little disgusted by its appearance. The food was brown,
I was about to be sick. There were two minutes left in lunch. I wouldn’t touch
my food. I went home hungry, and at home I vowed never to buy lunch again
because the food has a bunch of whole wheat, its getting people sick, there is
a simple solution to these problems, just get a salad that’s appetizing and a
soup bar.
The cafeteria should get better lunches. No one
buys lunch so everyone has smaller lunch time. Therefore people who didn’t buy
lunch have to eat fast. Thus now no one at all will buy lunch. The people who
buy lunch don’t have to eat fast because the lunch ladies only give a salad, whatever
the lunch is, a milk or juice, and fruit.
The cafeteria should get better lunches. In
addition to having to eat fast the food now has more whole wheat than the
cafeteria has ever had in the food. In
other words the food is brown. The food doesn’t taste good, smell good, or look
good. For example the hot dogs are rubber, and the salad is dredged with either
water, or really gross salad dressing.
The cafeteria should get better
lunches. Because lunches don’t taste good people are getting sick. Once it was
a normal Wednesday and I was at senior tea, one girl who was in fourth grade
just bought lunch, we were in the middle of a song and she threw up. In
addition to people throwing up, the school nurse has to work harder to keep
that child healthy until the parent or guardian comes to get the person.
Meanwhile the teachers are saying “wash your hands so you don’t get sick” well
people aren’t getting sick that way. It’s because of the lunch. All of the
teachers have no experience with the food because they haven’t tasted it. The
cooks are making the food look healthy, (the teachers probably think its
healthy) but they’re actually making the food with gross products.
To help the school get better lunches,
just donate a few dollars to some fund raisers. That way the school will have
more money to make the school better with. Having more money can cure the whole
wheat and reduced fat addiction, and people getting sick. With soup bars that people
can buy, and salads that are edible then a lot more people will buy lunch, and
I mean A LOT! If your parent or guardian has to go to work at 8:15 then they
would let you buy lunch instead of making a lunch, because the parents know
that the food is good and not like it is now.
ilove your lead! it is very discriptive.I LOVE it!
ReplyDeleteJane
Whoa Tess, this essay is incredible!When I saw your name, I was surprised! This is a wicked, wicked, wicked good essay! You are a professinial essayist!
ReplyDeleteSophia McGonagle
I love this essay. I can really hear your voice. Also I agree we do need better lunches and less whole grain!! I love it!
ReplyDeleteAna Rich
Very clear. You will be a very good writer when you get older. You are very good at pulling the reader in.
ReplyDeleteCatherine
Tess i loved how you were so descriptive ! i really could imagine being there with that disgusting food haha :)Just wish that the ending left me with a lastin impression
ReplyDelete-abby
Tess, this is a really good essay. You are really clear and I totally agree about the school lunches.
ReplyDeleteDeclan
amazing essay! I completely agree with the topic. keep on writing great essays! -maddie
ReplyDeleteI loved this, and totally agree with you! i wish you hadn't made some stuff up, like the hot dogs being rubber, but besides that, then it was totally great! I loved it!
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