Friday, February 26, 2010

Ascend

When you fly into space in a steady way, you think
of a helicopter hovering into the air,
this word ascend go's up but never comes down,
as the space shuttle detaches from the,
space station it hovers in the,
air then it zooms out into,
space not leaving a trail,
as we prepare to decend me and
my friend think of,
a spirit ascending away


By: Jack W, Erika, Meghan D, and Brian

2 comments:

  1. Good job! You used lots of actions and made it sound like a story!

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  2. i like it! but i dont think you described ascend enough. but you definitley gave a lot of examples. good job.
    from,
    sam

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