Thursday, February 25, 2010

Ascend

The rocket ascended into outerspace with
an amazing pace,
like when you rise up in the sky when you
jump onto an airplane
and when,a lion's mane flies up
when the wind blows
who knows how the spirits rose
when the fears grow

by Meghan D, Erika, Brian, and Jack W.
(ascend:to rise in a steady way)

3 comments:

  1. I totally get what ascennd means now, wow you did a great job explaining
    HC

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  2. I like your poem but some of it does not make sence. other wise it is very good. BM

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  3. nice job but i think you could add some more


    from,
    S.S

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