Revive
by Olivia and Erin
What revives you?
A cup of herbal tea,
The beautiful sight
Of the rolling sea,
Flying a kite
Or being out in the night
What revives you?
Revive will calm you down
If you're under stress,
Or if you're in a mess
Revive is the one to call
She'll make you strong again
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I really like this poem, especially the last stanza. I like the examples in the first stanza, especially the part about the sea, but I don't think the rest of it really goes with the poem. I like, however, how the stanzas are different, with different rythms and everything, and are still similar, and still both relate to the word.
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